Rough cut 2 + audience feedback

This is the second cut, the difference from the first cut to this, is the placements of clips and how i have made them lead into each other.

Here it is



This is the feedback



The feedback its self isn't very helpful but i picked up on a few points,

• I need to work on the titles more
• Need to add the end scene
• Its quite good so far
• Song is a good choice

Mainly the feedback i have got is the same as what i have had in the past.