As this is a resubmission, all posts dated before October 2010 refer to the original submission. Substantial additional research and re-filming has been done since then!
All post titles finishing with UPDATED have been updated as well as the last 6 posts which is the evaluation

Tuesday 14 December 2010

Rough cut 2 & 2.5 with feedback (UPDATED)

This rough cut is only of the opening of my opening. It is my first test of my recorded soundtrack with the starting footage. It is missing a few shots which i am going to change of the titles.




  • Change the titles , use your original ideas.
  • Cut a few of the shots down to shorten the opening as well as make it flow better.
I re shot the title shots and added them in, and decided to upload it to you-tube for some feedback.



  • The titles are much much better.
  • You can still cut the edit down a little bit more to make it flow better.
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