As this is a resubmission, all posts dated before October 2010 refer to the original submission. Substantial additional research and re-filming has been done since then!
All post titles finishing with UPDATED have been updated as well as the last 6 posts which is the evaluation

Thursday 16 December 2010

Rough Cut 4 with Feedback (UPDATED)

My fourth rough cut for my film Not a Chance, they is feedback below the video. The feedback was given in a screening on my rough cut in front of 8 other media studies, Unfortunatly i wasn't able to record the screening so instead i have just typed up the feedback.



Feedback
  • A few cases where shots can STILL be cut down, such as when boy closes door, during shower part etc. You need to cut out 15seconds of footage.
  • Make the slow motion part stand out more with a change in brightness.
  • Make edwin slide down the locker in slow motion
  • Change the outside title part around to make more intresting
  • Check out continuity on the headphones (checked and was none)
  • Staring is spelt Starring (can't change this now)
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